I don't know what went wrong his week but the last episode of my serial has had less than 60 readers in four days.
Was there too much eroticism?
Not enough suspense?
A weak story line?
I don't know, all I do know is that with so few readers after four days; when the usual starting point is higher, I have ended the serial. I will continue to write for a close friend who is enjoying but for anybody else, if you wish to read more there are two options either contact me or wait for the book - if I bring it out.